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Keelin (edited- again)

Post by ferretrunner on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:56 am

Color: Sable Full name: Brookshire's Lady Ambrose Keelin
Sex: Jill
Pack Affiliation: None. She will probably be Shining Stars
Age: 2 years
History:
Keelin is a breeding jill at a reputable breeder, although sometimes she sell the kits a little younger than she should. She is absolutely gorgeous and has already won several shows and is championship line. She has had two litters. Her first litter was an "accident" (to the breeder) but was with her well loved mate, Patch. Patch was sold later to another breeder. She is a gentle ferret, with strong maternal instinct. She's a good hunter and a mean fighter, if she has to be. She loves kits and enjoys teaching them.

She is the mother of Loki, Limmerick, Peanut (an albino), Soldier (a sable-mitt), and Precious (sable) from her second litter. Her first litter is just over a year old.

Her owner had taken Keelin and the kits to a ferret show. All the kits were sold at the show to various homes. On the way back from the show, her owner was in a serious car accident. Keelin was not injured, but her carrier had popped open when it was damaged. The rescue personnel did not see the ferret. The owner went to the hospital and Keelin ended up in the woods, lost. She met up with a patrol ferret from Mafia, who she beat in a fight. He took her back to the burrow. She was accepted as Mafia by Al. A bright ferret, she knew she had to act the part to survive.

This is a different breeder than the Mafia breeder.


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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by Kusuma on Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:35 am

I'm not sure if the Mafia is best for her. The Mafia are pure evil and will attack and maul anything that isn't, except for the ferrets they enslaved.
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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by ferretrunner on Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:48 am

Ah. I was wondering about adding her into the mix as an ally (insider) if Dicky, Ginger, and Nippsy get free. Plot inside a plot....
But that might not be where you're wanting to go. It just looked like you were setting up the "Outsiders" as escapees from the Mafia.

With the kits' backstory- they came through Mafia territory, yet weren't killed or captured. Keelin found them and chased them off into Shining Stars territory, hoping the kits would be ok. I guess backstory could be they came through the Shadows. They're not evil, just creepy/weird, right?

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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by FoodIsYummy on Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:49 am

Ya.
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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by Kusuma on Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:51 am

Since she was there since they formed? If that's what you ment, you shouldknow their whole history, I'll PM it to you.
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Post by ferretrunner on Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:52 am

Or, she could decide to defect from Mafia into Shining Stars- just cross the border. May have a bit of convincing to do....

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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by Kusuma on Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:54 am

Um... I'll just PM the history to you. I mean these ferrets are the following:

Insane
Out of control
Savage
Attack and kill nearly anything that crosses their path
Al killed one of their own kits, possibly his own son
Charlotte actually wanted Boon to kill his brother Ned, only to be beaten to it by Al
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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by ferretrunner on Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:57 am

Ouch... they are nuts. How can they hold a pack? It seems the others would all either leave or come together and fight them?

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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by Kusuma on Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:58 am

They all have one thing in common, they think that they can form an army out of all dark ferrets. I'll get to the PM, it'll explain far more.
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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by ferretrunner on Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:12 pm

THanks for the PM. I see what you mean about Keelin not fitting in with Mafia. So, the Outsiders were enslaved by Mafia. Do you have any specific ideas for Shadows? Would she fit there? It seems they're weird. But not evil- although there may be evil in some of the members.

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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by Kusuma on Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:08 pm

Well, they are all albinos and they don't speak much. There are three adults and no kits yet.
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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by Kusuma on Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:27 am

I had a plot idea, if you are interested I can PM it to you.
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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by ferretrunner on Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:32 am

Didn't see that. What do you think about the edit on Keelin's character? I can do it again... my plot idea was her somehow showing up. Although, it may not work. PM me yours. We'll figure which seems more interesting.

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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by PandoraFerret on Fri Jul 30, 2010 8:53 pm

i think shes a great character. even if she joined the mafia (which was a bad choice) she still seems extreamly interesting

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Re: Keelin (edited- again)

Post by FoodIsYummy on Sat Jul 31, 2010 7:33 am

Wait, but what about the plot with her and Jerchio?
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